Comment 4 for bug 13287

I've just reviewed the updated packages. Here are my comments:
1. The first section title appears to be "cut-off"...maybe there's just a
problem with line spacing.
2. You may not need to capitalize "ubuntu"; it's not capitalized in other parts
of the OS. Sorry!
3. Please place a comma (,) after self-tests in the first section.
4. Here's a rewrite of the Improvement section:
"Developers utilize the collected data to fine tune autodetection and improve
ubuntu hardware support. By submitting your hardware information to the central
ubuntu database,(put a comma here) you will have online access to your data in
the future. No personal user information will be collected or transmitted
through this process."
5. Do you need a personal privacy statement? Does the user need to
review/agree with some sort of agreement? I'm not sure of legal implications
with ubuntu or Canonical Ltd???
Looking good!